much better layout and photography choices.good!!your text type is still too round.that's an opinion.if you want to use that face, you'll have to figure how to make it work in the column width you chose.maybe column is too narrow.it's leaving nasty gutters.ie. the word spacing is poor.suggest you try a few less round sans serif faces.in all caps it looks okay, but you need to go into that long subhed or story start and clean up the letter spacing and bits that are flying about.remember, you're trying to create astro turf.this is the basis of great edit design.it cannot be skipped or done sloppily.please go back and fix.and btw, your byline combo is jumpy.look at gq for great typographic details.try to steal some.you can't so don't worry about copying.but, give it a go.it's a strong standard.g.
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much better layout and photography choices.
good!!
your text type is still too round.
that's an opinion.
if you want to use that face, you'll have to figure how to make it work in the column width you chose.
maybe column is too narrow.
it's leaving nasty gutters.
ie. the word spacing is poor.
suggest you try a few less round sans serif faces.
in all caps it looks okay, but you need to go into that long subhed or story start and clean up the letter spacing and bits that are flying about.
remember, you're trying to create astro turf.
this is the basis of great edit design.
it cannot be skipped or done sloppily.
please go back and fix.
and btw, your byline combo is jumpy.
look at gq for great typographic details.
try to steal some.
you can't so don't worry about copying.
but, give it a go.
it's a strong standard.
g.
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